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roses inundate me......keeping at bay their thorns.....thinking me beautifully complete they don prick.....just if i could , how wish to show the ugly......vulnerability underneath!

.......judging me ........hail and stong they don attack........am i lucky that they can't see the aching wounds..........verile and tender!

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Sonali GoelGarg said…
beautiful lines Sonam...very relevant.
You are a master at the art of using words...really!
sonam said…
oh....thank you so much!
i'm sure getting such words from you ....i probably have done something worthwhile!
THANKS!!!
Gaurav Saxena said…
Hi...I did not know unkown visitors would read my blog cause I myself don't visit it anymore, but today i did.
Nice words written here...poetry or no, the expression sounds true. Nice work. Some times the best poem has no words.
wishes
GS
Gaurav Saxena said…
Thanks for dropping by and writing that comment ...
sonam said…
thanks! those r indeed true, infact that's just an expression of what i feel.

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